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justme<3 New Member
since 2008-08-30
Posts 1none of ur business |
a mirror is a meerreflection of the outside but never trully knows the inside. . . . your scared, dont know were to turn the pain inside is an aching burn confused and so unsure not really sure there is a cure heart broken nd torn your nerves streched and worn your world has lost all color everything so dark and gray all your dreams just kinda faded away thtats wat my mirror cant tell me about myself life is short live it to the fullest |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice except for the spelling...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello Jordan. Welcome to Passions! As this is a prose forum, your poem won't be seen by many in here, or will be overlooked as it is not necessarily prose. Would you like to have this moved to a poetry forum of your choice? Sunshine " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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