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steve New Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 9Canada |
the twilight hour from the rooftop the sun does dim a watercoloured masterpiece the warmth drains down leaving the air cold i ponder witnessing such godly art whether a leap from this edge helped from such a great fall would break any records i throw gum over abysmal dismay head, not record, would be broken i sigh and i think of her once again instinctive thought to a sigh the last of my light fades and my caffeine is running low time to head home another night for now another sun tomorrow another sigh to swallow ~steve critiques are welcomed, although i have no intentions on changing anything. i am finding the anti-depressant medication im on doing for my depression what a coffee filter does when set to the task of holding water. ty. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Steve, "and i think of her once again instinctive thought to a sigh the last of my light fades and my caffeine is running low time to head home another night for now another sun tomorrow another sigh to swallow" I really do like this.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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scarletbegonias Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59 |
i do love this poem. i have read it often. it's very beautiful. |
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