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Artofmark Junior Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 41 |
My love, my love where did thou go? Niether Above the clounds nor under the ground My Love I have searched but high and low Beneath the seas or or even in trees Behold my love not found My love my love where did thou go My love lost forever a echo I listen hard but can not find My love I have searched but high and low I search the paths wide or narrow For my love truly unique My love, my love where did thou go? i shall seek from earth to pluto No distance far to great My love I have searched but high and low blind or sight, you can not see For but only feel, in my heart my love my love where did thou go? My love, i have searched but high and low |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
My love, i have searched but high and low this was my favorite line.. this seems to be to me more like a poem than prose no offense.. you might get some more feedback if you post poems in poetry forums.. by the way.....WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! I hope you enjoy it here. looking forward to your poetry.. ~heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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Artofmark Junior Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 41 |
yea i wasnt really paying attention at were i was posting it, im new to this forum thing |
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