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Artofmark
Junior Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 41


0 posted 2006-07-13 05:33 PM



My love, my love where did thou go?
Niether Above the clounds nor under the ground
My Love I have searched but high and low

Beneath the seas or or even in trees
Behold my love not found
My love my love where did thou go

My love lost forever a echo
I listen hard but can not find
My love I have searched but high and low

I search the paths wide or narrow
For my love truly unique
My love, my love where did thou go?

i shall seek from earth to pluto
No distance far to great
My love I have searched but high and low

blind or sight, you can not see
For but only feel, in my heart
my love my love where did thou go?
My love, i have searched but high and low

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the_girl_next_door
Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
1 posted 2006-07-13 10:15 PM


My love, i have searched but high and low


this was my favorite line.. this seems to be to me more like a poem than prose no offense.. you might get some more feedback if you post poems in poetry forums.. by the way.....WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!  I hope you enjoy it here.
looking forward to your poetry..

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Artofmark
Junior Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 41

2 posted 2006-07-13 10:24 PM


yea i wasnt really paying attention at were i was posting it, im new to this forum thing
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