Cronicles of a desperate girl chpt 1

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Cronicles of a desperate girl chpt 1

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-02-19 04:02 PM

-Oh what love could becken my heart so like an echoing drum in the distance?  I will never see you again and how my lungs ache notwanting to breathe.

My air, you left me so, will I ever breath you upon my lips? I still remember the way you crossed your lips and laughed and still I wonder if you linger still around me like you do my heart.

There where mountains out side my door and how my world was limited to the world around me.  You came and breathed life into my soul and to gether we flew away from that enviremental prison I lived so long.

I washed up ashore and I was wondering if you could give me "a breath of fresh air."

-Today you smiled at me. Your dimples couldn't hide behind the red of your face when I smiled at you. Nor could I not notace you casually flex your arms as you stretched. They were nice muscles. Maybe next time you'll hold me in them.

-Today I flirted with the cash register clerk. It's funny how easy it is to get free food by fluttering my eyes and pouting my lips. It was like the guy never had a girl flirt with him before. The things I do for fried cheeze curds.

Ok guys this is meant to be funny. I am practacing for an essay. Plz critique.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-03-03 11:45 PM

Enjoyed...James

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2005-03-04 10:21 PM

I don't think its funny at all, it is wonderful. To me, it reads like a journal piece . . . right from your thoughts from that day.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-03-12 12:57 PM

Well I am Glad you liked them.

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