Passions in Prose |
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lost reminisces. |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
i'm new at this ![]() anything that you have to say is greatly appreciated. ----------------------- we were always scared of your grandfathers nursing home; tripping over wheelchairs and lost reminisces that seemed to float in the air. and your grandfathers hands; the ones that would never let go. there was always fear. and it was hard to smile and mean it. You always had to know the right things to say and you always had to remember that moment. because it might never come again. summer was always the perfect time to push your handprints into the sandboxes and play frisbee with the clouds. and you always had pink lemonade and jars full with beautiful butterflies. and you loved to trace the outlines of his fingertips. she loved to whisper the words please forgive me. and time was nothing but numbers on the wall. love was only meant for people who believed in it. his blue eyes only made me run faster away. i never did want to fall. so, while the sun sets on another day; i'm waiting for those words that make me stay. |
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wllz.on.ice Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 35the united kingdom. |
i suppose time is important for us all. nice read. write more, maybe some longer stuff ![]() |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
All I have to say is that if you're new at this, then you'll just get better with time. I enjoyed it very much, I like your style... you remind me of me at my best (and that's a good thing). Keep writing ^_^ and then He created the horse... |
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