Passions in Prose |
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Yesterday was beautiful |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket ![]() |
Yesterday on my walk to his house, everything went perfect; simply perfect. The birds were flying around, bathing in the sprinklers. The mail man collected the mail, waving and smiling at the woman sipping her coffee on her porch as she held the daily news paper. The black top never seemed so black and the street never looked so clean. The sky was blue; the brightest blue I'd ever lay my eyes upon and there wasn't a cloud in site. The weather wasn't harmful. The wind couldn't beat the beams of light shining on my shoulders. The distance didn't bother me this time around. The plaster dented from you fist..In the hall where you had your first kiss..Reminds you that the memorys wont fade |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Perfect description, leaving a trail of sweetness behind! misc'e |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
![]() does sound nice...while it lasts ![]() |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hm.. This is almost like one of those pieces that could work either as a poem or as prose. You've done nicely on the prose side of things, though you did make a few spelling mistakes. Thanks for sharing. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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a123 Member
since 2004-03-27
Posts 72 |
Yesterday was beautiful and you described it beautifully. ![]() I loved it. a123 |
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