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Freak |
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Fariegirl Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 147 |
"Freak!" I hear from one of the more popular groups. "Tree hugger!" From another. I keep my head down, a song that I have in my head is the only thing keeping me from yelling back. "Hey, freak girl! Why do you even come to school, you ain't gonna learn nothin'!" I hear one of the jocks say. "Screw you." I think, but don't say it. This is my life, but I didn't choose it. I used to have more friends, but they all changed. One of the preps approaches me. "Hey, don't listen to them, they don't know you." I look up, hope filling my heart. She continues, "If they did, they wouldn't waste their breath on a case like yours." She laughs, then walks back to her click. I hate this school. "Weirdo!" I hear. Then I feel a fry hit me in the back of the head. I stand up. "Watch it!" I yell. “Watcha gonna do about it, freak?” The jock that threw it at me said. In my head, I stand up to the boy, but I just sit down. “That’s what I thought, don’t be messin with me.” He says. By now, I just can’t stand it, I get up. “What, you wanna start something?” He says, poking me in the shoulder. “What if I do.” I say quietly. “What was that?” He says louder then necessary. “I said,” I walk towards him, “What if I do.” He just laughs. “The tree hugger thinks that she can win!” Now the crowd begins to gather, they start chanting, “Fight, fight, fight,” over and over. He steps close to me, I take his arm and twist it behind his back. The crowd cheers for me, I’m winning. He screams at me to let him go, I wait a few more seconds then throw him into the jeering crowd. I am brought out of this dream by another taunt. “Wake up tree girl! Time for class!” I smile as the last of my dream fades away. This is my life, but I didn't choose it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello my soul. let's break this down... quote: ~*~ You don't ask for a critique, but I will offer the above suggestion. Break out the speech, set the play, and walk away, the winner! I am very impressed. I would like to see more, please! |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked this ![]() Im a child. |
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