navwin » Main Forums » Passions in Prose » a dream
Passions in Prose
Post A Reply Post New Topic a dream Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Fariegirl
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 147


0 posted 2003-06-10 11:31 AM



She ran outside, ran through the wind and the rain to get there. She was tired, but it had all been worth it. She was there, the place that she had been striving to go ever since Josh was taken. She came upon the gates of the castle and knocked. The sound of her opened hand hitting against the massive wooden door was like an unwelcome message of bad news. She waited, but there was no reply. She knocked again, this time the giant doors swung open. She had expected to see the castle, but there was nothing but dessert. The doors shut behind her, she looked back at them, but there was a stone wall. She found herself in a dungeon. She looked out of the small window and saw the black-cloaked knights coming toward her. As they entered her cell she tried to get past them, but they grabbed her. She looked back and saw Josh. “Josh, help me, please.” She said to the almost ghost-like man, but he just sat there, as helpless as she had been the night that the knights had taken away her husband. “Josh!” she screamed to him.

She had been having thoses dreams for weeks now

© Copyright 2003 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
1 posted 2003-06-10 11:08 PM


Cool writing...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Fariegirl
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 147

2 posted 2003-06-12 04:44 PM


thanks
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Main Forums » Passions in Prose » a dream

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary