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Passions in Prose

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WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-03-06 03:04 PM

This is the scent I was looking for. Above all others, this one is real. Don't try to hold your smell to mine. Wind is meaningless here. do you agree? Why try to torture who loves this said pain?
Rings are for fools who pray. Silence! for once in this hell! I should keep my mouth shut when I scream, it makes me crazy.

I was told this wasn't prose and my heart broke open. Now I think I'll send myself some hate mail.

[This message has been edited by WisprWnd (03-06-2003 03:13 PM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-03-10 12:00 PM

Who told you this wasn't prose - they lied.
Good work
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

2 posted 2003-03-10 09:33 AM

Good, I'm glad you like it.
I didn't put much effort in it though,
so i appreciate the feedback.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-03-10 02:35 PM

Forget the hate mail - interesting post this one. Thanks for the read.

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

4 posted 2003-03-15 04:26 PM

I understand it, I don't understand it but a certainty I like it.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

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