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0 posted 2002-10-05 10:53 PM



I pulled back my mound of matted hair and looked into the pieces of a shattered mirror. It used to be a mirrior untill I threw it at my mother. She would never understand me,She didn't understand that I was young and foolish, she took it way out of poportion, I was beginning to hate her. I used to be one of those smart popular preppy kids, you know the ones who had the clothes and the guys begging. Then I met him his glazed eyes, blue as my midnight eye shadow, His lips a perfect shade of cream. I envyed him I wanted to look like that, Have that mysterious look. We met, and we continued to see each other. Happiest days of my life it was new and all so exciting. Then i felt something, Something growing. I went to the doctor and his news flawed me...i'd been so careful, I was the one this was never suppose to happen too. I told him his eyes turned a dusty black, the rage in his face, he ripped my heart out and his word pierced through my soul, my entire body went numb......"it's not mine, You are just dirty like they all say." My tears streamed down my icy chilled cheeks as he stormed away angryily. It all went downhill from ther,. My life as a mother began.

~*Azi*~

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1 posted 2002-10-06 12:03 PM


Rough beginnings can still bring happy endings. Write more, please. Will we get to meet the littlest heart stealer?
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