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Passions in Prose

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Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

0 posted 2002-08-09 12:04 PM

Running his palm smoothly down her spine, she sighs.
She turns to his cheek. ‘Why do you touch me so?’ She whispers…
He requites her whisper, ‘ Because you make me feel like a feather’.
As he tries to shy from his reply she locks a magnetic gaze which draws cheek to cheek. Making them both feel weak, but as their intuition leaks, strong.
He realigns with her eyes. He again replies ‘ I like you inside and out.’
He stabs the dark with an arrow ‘Do you like me?’

[This message has been edited by Chameleon (08-11-2002 06:29 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-08-09 11:59 AM

Chameleon,
I like what you've done with this. Short and sweet but encapsulating a wonderful concept.
I could never be this brief.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

2 posted 2002-08-12 02:31 AM

hmm sounds very delicious.

desolation angel
Junior Member

since 2002-08-11

Posts 20
east coast

3 posted 2002-08-12 07:47 PM

weeee. that was fun. good job!

don't undress my love
you might find a mannequin:
don't undress the mannequin
you might find
my love
-bukowski

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