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andy04
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since 2005-11-16
Posts 22
New South Wales

0 posted 2005-11-16 10:19 PM



if you have a love poem and want to share it plz do so.
if you have any critisism about MY poem plz feel free to tell me
here is my poem

love is kind,
love is sweet'
mylove for you shall not defeat.
you're what i want,
you're what i need,
for the loss of you my heart will bleed.
you are the fire that warms my heart,
my love for you will never part.
these words i've written especially for you,
means only one thing,
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!

i hope you like it, if not plz tell me why

© Copyright 2005 andy04 - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-11-16 11:48 PM


Hello Andy and welcome to Passions.
I enjoyed your first post.
You probably would get more replies though if you post your next poem in one of the main poetry forums such as Open or if you are a teenager ... in the Teen forum. Take a look around and see which area that you might like to post in. Hugs, Chris



Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2005-11-17 11:11 PM


When you decide which poetry forum you'd like, just post your choice  here or email me - I'll be happy to move it.  This forum is reserved for discussion, so you won't get much response here.  Waiting for your reply...
andy04
Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 22
New South Wales
3 posted 2005-11-20 05:42 PM


thank you
ill take your advise

a heart is not a play thing
a heart is not a toy
but if you want it broken
give it to a boy!!!

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