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Done asking why....

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-29 10:00 PM

are you done asking why
theres so much to know
but we have quite a ways to go
if you lead me to the morning after
can that prevent more disaster
for the see through soul
the place i save..where nothing will ever grow

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

1 posted 2000-01-29 11:13 PM

jackal: intriguing, but shrouded in mystery for my feeble mind... pray tell, of what does this poem speak?

sincerely,
jerome the boy that just made kool-aid

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Poertree
Senior Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 1359
UK

2 posted 2000-01-30 04:31 PM

I guess this is maybe something to do with love going wrong? but perhaps a little less obscurity and more "fleshing out" maybe in order ..

just an op.....

Philip

Tony Di Bart
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 160
Toronto, Canada

3 posted 2000-01-30 05:07 PM

I like the poem. I interpret it as your little voice in your head talkng to you and you talking back. Or maybe is it life leading you and you asking why? I do not know but i like it none the less.

I especially like
"if you lead me to the morning after
can that prevent more disaster"

I would be interested in hearing what your intention was in the poem.

See Ya

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