Critical Analysis #1 |
jazz-are you hungry? |
dianawho? New Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 8 |
no ears needed just need turn on the music begin to feed no mouth needed just greed |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Excellent, a powerful & timely message. So short and well honed, the rhthym is great! Strong Kudos & Welcome to CA |
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dianawho? New Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 8 |
thank you haze for responding. I wanted to convey how personally jazz touches me. hope i was successful. |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
DAMN! Yes! I missed that layer! I took the beat and read this to social conscience, so much more...but you just showed me something I missed...WONDERFUL...LOVE IT! |
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J.L. Humphres Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 201Alabama |
dianawho? Oh my! I love this. It is a rare thing,(at least it is rare in my writing) to express such personal emotion in so few lines. Good job, thanks for the read, and welcome. J.L.H. Jason I...I have seen the best minds of my generation... --Allen Ginsberg |
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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
Very cool, i liked this a lot. |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
It took me a few reads to see where you were going and I'll be the first person to admit that there's is no experience quite like LIVE jazz. Do you honestly get the same sensation from CD's? Brad |
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dianawho? New Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 8 |
hi Brad, sometimes i can travel back to the live recording session clinging to the edge of the cd. but only if it is a good recording. |
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John Foulstone Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 100Australia |
Welcome to CA, Diana. I don't like jazz, but I liked this. It's never too late to have a happy childhood ... |
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