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Not the love you seek

idream2dream
Junior Member

since 1999-11-30

Posts 15
bessemer

0 posted 1999-12-09 09:26 PM

A touch a whisper a tear
Your hand gently upon my cheek
Closing my eyes not wanting to hear
I'm not the love you seek

My heart broken, dreams shattered
For I know not what to do
I am alone all torn and tattered
As the wind blows whispering I love you

I want to run fast away far
My legs wont move I'm here frozen
Watching my love my ,dream drive off in his car
Our dream our love the book has clozen.

Bright Melody
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 37
O'Fallon Illinois

1 posted 1999-12-10 07:00 PM

I love this. I was in a similar situation earlier this year. It was an excellent expression of your feelings. Great job.

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