Critical Analysis #1 |
oh the love of lust |
Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
oh the love of lust and the lust of love. It does seem severely over-rated to me, she says with all sincerity, and a smile curling her lips. An infatuation here, a new spark there the land of cyber is rich with variety for all your shopping needs. One to make you feel special, one to make you go mmmmm, one who likes you just the way you are one who makes you aspire to be better one to make you strong and one who can properly bring you to your knees, and oh watch out, in the games that you play, for the special one that you fish for might just be the one to get away. ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
how dare you post such a post in such an illegible color. i myself had to highlight it to read it. well now, on to the poem. 1)are the first couple of lines, the comparason of love and lust a quote? it seems maybe that way. 2) i think that this poem is about cyber romance? i'm probably too stupid to figure it out, but it doesn't seem too clear. otherwise i think that it is a pretty good poem. it would be to your advantage to put it in a more visible color. |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Iloveit, Are you trying to make this hard to read? You've got to explain your thinking on this one when you have time. Brad |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm lusting over this poem...it is very well written and I often find myself wondering are these feelings we are revealing based on lust or love. James |
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Willem Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 139Inverness, FL, USA |
Iloveit, no I don't, but I do find it a well-constructed piece of poetry on an interesting subject. Not one to forward to my teenage grandchildren, though...:-)> Willem |
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