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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
in all aspects areas and all avenues of life i most well know the bottom the dregs, societal strife so i'm not surprised when i again see myself always on the bottom of anything i can be i'm living off algae, parasites and scum with the aristocracy above me at whom i bite my thumb you shall know i do not loathe my position the bottom: more noble, certainly free so i welcome no transition ------------------ "Come night, come darkness, for you cannot come too soon or stay too long in such a place as this." Charles Dickens roxane |
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JesiKa raBBit Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 11midland Texas USA |
roxan, hey this is a tight poem. as you know i know what it's like to be on the bottom but sometimes force myself to put forth this fack euphoria just to get throught the day because i have to be happy at least for my son. i can't let him see his mom down and not happy and i know he's just a year but i'm certin he can since it. so i fell this poem, thakx for sharing with us. anyway i left you a reply over in "what the hell is wrong with me?" [This message has been edited by JesiKa raBBit (edited 11-17-1999).] |
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