Critical Analysis #1 |
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Renee Junior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 18langhorne, PA 19047 |
If you reach out to me, I will pull you in. If you crawl into my arms, I will never let you fall. If you whisper in my ear, I will listen to everything you have to say. If you open your eyes to me, I will show you everything you need to see. If you open your ears to me. I will tell you everything you need to hear. If you open your heart to me, I will never let it be cold. I will keep you warm, Just as you have kept me warm. While you showed me, Everything I needed to see. As I listened to you tell me, Everything I needed to hear. You showed me what love is, And taught me how easy it is to fall into Each time I fell into your arms. So now I reach out to you, To whisper in your ear to say, "Thank you" for sharing your love with me, And teaching me the true definition of What the words, I Love You, really mean. ------------------ Linda Renee |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
This might make an interesting song but you've wet my appetite for a good story and then didn't deliver. Don't suppose you might want to expound a little more on the background to this piece? |
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