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Critical Analysis #1
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VelvetLuna
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 10
Canada
0 posted 1999-07-22 12:44 PM

Vision fades into the night,
a gunshot of murderous thoughts
of reality wounds revealed.
Thunderous hatred screams
as execution feels burn
on soft-surfaced skin.
Acidic melting shame,
disconnective mindless cares,
empty esteem of unfounded hope,
rip apart the injected veins
through serial killing ways.
Everything seems of disbelief,
choked upon unreal faith.
Unforgotten remembrance held
within hourly sadden frowns.
Morals undone of what becomes
taken away by familiar hands.
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