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VelvetLuna
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 10
Canada
0 posted 1999-07-22 12:40 PM

Once more all alone in fear
without love, without hope again
a permanent frown of sorrow
years of endless, desperate cries
weak archangel in disguise,
guilty of being alive
her lips painted of the palest colour
waiting for the final death kiss
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Alain DeLaCendres
Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119
Ohio
1 posted 1999-07-22 01:26 AM

I liked this one the best out of your group of four..these are very mysterious poems..very interesting I thought....

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