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Wait for me

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

0 posted 1999-07-19 10:46 AM

Wait for me

When your work is done
And the waters are calm,
When the trees bring down their boughs and cloak the day,
Do not be afraid

When breath becomes still
And life begins to fade
When your eyes are softened by my fathers gentle hand,
Do not be afraid

When the journey ends
And eternity begins
When the Angels come down to bring you peace,
Do not be afraid

I have watched you shine
And I shall watch you fade
I will be there when you soul enters my home
Do not be afraid

With love I let go
And love has brought you back
When life is done and heaven begins, wait for me
And do not be afraid

~Angela Erin Burke ~

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

1 posted 1999-07-22 09:19 PM

some one critique me!

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