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Letter to My Ladies

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-07-19 05:03 AM

I have never felt loved so strongly,
As I do when I'm with you.
I stumbled through my life so blindly,
Close to bidding this life adieu.

Then by random chat and happenstance,
Some old yearnings did arise.
A friend showed me the forum by chance,
Now I live for the replies.

The first of them I met was one voice,
A true lady, mild and sweet.
After I knew her I had no choice,
My heart admitted defeat.

Azblond has been there for me you know,
Despite my being impure.
Sometimes she reminds me of a doe,
Skittish, nervous and unsure.

The next would be a true kindred soul,
A beauty in her own right.
Isabelle, Izzy, or so I'm told,
Don't lose that girlish delight.

My newest Lady is Saxoness,
She will be a lovely friend.
I met her today I must confess,
Any more on her will depend.

Lastly, we come to Lady deVine,
Grande dame of erotic verse.
Her words hit the brain like a dry wine,
Leaving you with greater thirst.

For any I've forgotten to craft rhyme,
It fills me with such sorrow.
It was not for lack of time,
You'll have one on the morrow.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
DreamEvil©

Sweet T
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

1 posted 1999-07-29 06:44 PM

I couldn't let one of my favorite poets not have any comments. You are a master in your own field. I consider you in sorts a teacher of the finer art. I have alot of questions I could ask you, but in truth I have no back-bone. I am a child of sorts and you are the parent. Thank you for letting us read your poetry.
lol....Sweet T

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 2013-03-16 04:45 PM

Can you believe that I JUST NOW saw this poem? It may be extremely belated, but DreamEvil, if you're still out there, thank you. From me.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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