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Critical Analysis #1

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2001-10-03 12:58 PM

Harmony and cacophony
side by side
whispering through
the strings of our hearts
like ebony and ivory
yin and yang
up and down
merging into
one
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Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2001-12-31 07:32 PM

I loved the message in this one, Kacy....
We should all learn to get along with our opposites....
The poem was also beautifully written.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-01-01 12:00 PM

I too enjoyed this. Nicely written.

lizzyluv
Junior Member

since 2001-12-27

Posts 46
nh, usa. we suck.

3 posted 2002-01-01 06:20 PM

cute, i'm not quite sure what you meant, but cute.

"everyone is broken by something they love and worship"- Francesca Lia Block
*lizzy*

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