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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Filled with the wonder of great expectations Stories of treasures that others have sought Covered with dust of the lost generations A lonesome plantain grows by the road Ears towards heaven, roots in the ground Silently waiting, covered with haze A plant rarely cares for what is around Blindly seeking the warm distant rays I stand beside it, laughing with sorrow With dirt and mud all over my boots In wild pursuit of unending tomorrow I dream everyday of having its roots ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Haven't I seen this in a couple of other places before  ? I like the word 'plantain' but I wonder what particular type of mountain/plant you wish to be? Plant/mountain's have ears? If they rarely care what is 'around them', I suppose they rarely use whatever auditory devices they might have. Two points: Be more specific in your imagery. Try to explain a little bit more clearly why you wish to be this thing? Interested in seeing the results here, not elsewhere. Brad |
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