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Ode to Beth (whimsical)

Lerk
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 49
Dayton, OH USA

0 posted 2001-01-15 01:48 PM

AN ODE TO BETH

ith beth to honor Beth
with wayth dark and mysterieth.

all hail to thee, our winthome Beth
and raith our glatheth to thee
were we not oft distracteth tho
I would have anthered earlieth

Forgive my lipth I ath of thee
my tongue it slipth tho eathilee
But Beth we with to honor thee
and thay hello with voith tho breathilee
we hail thee with a thong!

J.L. Humphres
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 201
Alabama

1 posted 2001-01-16 05:16 AM

Lerk,

This is pure gold, great poem.
J.L.H.

Jason
God is a warm whisper from the cool void.
Jack Kerouac

Lerk
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 49
Dayton, OH USA

2 posted 2001-01-17 09:23 AM

thanks. I am tho thilly thometimes!

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

3 posted 2001-01-17 11:21 AM

Hey Lerk,

This really does both lighten and brighten the CA. Great job. Thanks for posting. BTW, a therapist could probably help with your problem.

Pete

Lerk
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 49
Dayton, OH USA

4 posted 2001-01-22 02:17 PM

whith problem ith that?

"A little folly now and then, is treasured by the wisest men" --Willy Wonka

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

5 posted 2001-01-23 03:29 PM

I think you've been reading too much Dickens.

This was great!

Brad

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