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Behind the closet door

dreamer1 12 5 24
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0 posted 2000-12-16 07:06 PM

I am a captive
in my room;
But, behind the door,
I can escape.
        There is a whole world there
        a world where I am free
        to explore many wonders;
        free to inhale the clean, fresh air
        of the outdoors;
        free to touch and feel
        the bark of the dogwood;
        to open my eyes
        to see and hear
        the mighty waterfall
        crashing down the cliff;
        behind the door;
        free to taste the rain
        to escape the tight spaces
        the confinement
        of the walls of my room
        of the walls of my mind.
Here, I can do anything
     be anything.
And, here, life is perfect.
I hear nothing of murders, of wars, of rape...

And if I could have two wishes
they would be
that I could spend my life here,
and that someone, somewhere
cared for me enough
to come with me.

....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice anything for the sake of it....

dreamer1 12 5 24
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1 posted 2000-12-17 03:21 PM

Hey, what does everyone think about the format? Please respond! Thanks

....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice anything for the sake of it....

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