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Missy Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 28USA |
That wonderful night, under the stars and moon When you leaned over and kissed me gently Could it be? My hopes and dreams becoming reality I didn’t believe that it happened actually A long pause, I know it scared you Was this happening All my dreams finally coming true Oh if you only knew All those nights I’d dreamed of you Ever since I was a little girl I dreamed of what would be When I met the man of my dreams That man was faceless Until shortly after I knew you Then every night when life was calm I thought of how close I wish we could be And on the nights I was scared or just down I dreamed of you coming to rescue me Now my dreams are reality I think of you day and night You are the man in my dreams My one true love - the only man for me Matter not what the world does Just know - together forever we will be |
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Missy Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 28USA |
I am wondering why this has had no replies! I was really hoping to get some feedback on this one. I entered 3 other writings on different forums the other night and this is the only one that has no replies. I would just like some feedback, this means alot to me. Thank You!!! |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Missy, This seems as though it is a very personal poem, and I and others in CA are often reluctant to critique words that are held so closely. I hope that's a good enough answer, because we don't just comment here...this is critique. If you would prefer to just get comments, I suggest you post this elsewhere. Good luck with your writing, and keep posting, Kris All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth |
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