A Different Remedy - (Religous Remedy revised)

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A Different Remedy - (Religous Remedy revised)

jonmcm
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since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

0 posted 2000-10-14 05:50 PM

Thinking of the countless times
That I have bent my mind,
To restrictions of a powerful clench.
Consumed by pain and sorrow,
I do watch and fear time,
As if there is no future hope.
I am overrun with guilt!
I am overrun with sin!
Where is the forgiveness?
Where is the unmerited love of God?
Only in the unseen – Faith.
Only in the wishing – Hope.

Time in its days, seasons, years
Has let much bitter water touch my lips;
It has not refreshed, but soured my thoughts
And caused my heart to grow so taut.
Having once loved, and dedicated my life
To the Divine Holy Lover,
There is now much pain in our divorce!
There is fear of His retribution!
Where now will I find the River of Life?
Where can I go to eat the Healing Fruit?
Faith – In my ability to succeed.
Hope – In my ability to survive.

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

1 posted 2000-10-15 12:40 PM

I can relate to your poem
but i cannot criticize

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

2 posted 2000-10-15 05:12 AM

Hi Monique

Thanks for your post!

It's a said state of affairs, but I have met many people who have experiences the same as us.

My best wishes

Jon

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