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The Wanderer

jesus
New Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 9
menasha, wi, usa

0 posted 1999-09-16 05:22 AM

I'm the kid who wanders the streets
watching the road pass under my feet
never staying in just one place
never seeing a familiar face
i come and then i'm gone
using my brain's, not my brawn
i get by with what i've got
there's not a battle i haven't fought
the troubles i face are not my own
'cause in maturity i have grown
by helping other who are in need
because that's what is stated in my creed
so forever shall i roam
until i find my way home.

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HCwildchild
Member

since 1999-09-03

Posts 55
Pennsylvania,USA

1 posted 1999-09-17 05:16 PM

I really liked this poem, there isn't a thing about it I would change, good work

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Heather C.

rachana.s
Member

since 1999-09-16

Posts 55
madras,tamil nadu,India

2 posted 1999-09-18 12:29 PM

reminds me of a guy I knew. really good. I liked it.

rachi

jesus
New Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 9
menasha, wi, usa

3 posted 1999-09-18 03:52 AM

thanks, it is about the way i spent quite a
few years. again thanks, i appreciate the good words

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