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All About You

m3jay
Junior Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 12

0 posted 2000-06-14 03:48 AM

All About You

By the title, this write is all about you,
And the feelings you give me about you.
First lets start with your beautiful face,
And how you stop me in my place.
I love the way you smile my way,
Even though its a bad one, you convert it to a good day.
The way your eyes look into mine,
The way they always gleam, glimmer, and shine.
It hurts me every time I see you cry,
Come talk to me, maybe I can help with the pain inside.
Skip that, don't want this to be gloomy and sad,
Don't want to make a good day go bad.
I really want to know how you think and feel,
I just really want to know you on the real.
Don't take this as a “Lets hook it up!”,
For now, don't need our friendship shaken up.
Friendships are always tighter than that,
For now that is all I want to be, you know I got your back.
If this is getting you confused,
These are all the feelings inside that are used.
Just needed to write them all down on paper,
Then maybe we could mold them together a little later.
First things first, I have to get my priorities straight,
My love for you will just have to wait.
We may become close or slowly fall apart,
But I promise you, I’ll never leave you with a broken heart.
Don't let the things I’ve said “Kindle a Fire!”,
But let it raise your spirits higher.
There is still so much that is unsaid,
Thousands of feelings for you raging through my head.
All of these words I say to you are real,
If its too much I’m sorry, it’s just how I feel.
I wont let anyones words change my mind,
All I see is you, beautiful and sweet all the time.
These words are for you, and you alone,
Take them to the heart, no one else be shown.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

1 posted 2000-06-14 08:57 AM

Hi
An heartfelt message for your friend..

Sincerely
A_L

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