To You ( a dedication to my boyfriend )

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To You ( a dedication to my boyfriend )

Maxine
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since 2000-06-09

Posts 6
Forestville, Maryland

0 posted 2000-06-09 06:32 PM

To You

I wanna tell you how I feel
But it's like when I open my mouth
To say it
Nothing comes out
I can't find a way to say it
Without knowing I'm coming out wrong
Cause what I wanna tell you
The words are so strong
I want us to be together
Forever
Through it all
And share everything we remember
I have feelings for everybody
But what I feel for you is deeper
All the others I put aside
For you my dear a keeper
A keeper to my heart
That shall never be broken
A keeper to my soul
That you hold as a token
So if you understand what I'm saying
That's aload off for me
Cause you know I got you
And that's where I wanna be

Maxine
New Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 6
Forestville, Maryland

1 posted 2000-06-09 06:47 PM

Being that I wrote this i should be the first to reply

This poem is very important cause it's a link to my relationship with my boyfriend
I can never tell him how I feel
Unless it's written.
My feelings with him are all on paper.
But for all who read this thank you
Andrea Maxine

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