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Cyndol Claycamp
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since 2000-05-17
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0 posted 2000-05-19 01:21 PM


The Shell

Not as in with a person or without.
But the solitude within.
That eats the hollow shell of the human.
Slowly the deteriorate from within.
They scream but no one hears.
They try to open up only to be pushed in the shell.
They maybe in there but it is still hollow.
Now they suppress themselves in never to open.
Feeling it a waist to try.
They seem full and together but they are truly hollow.
With a part that is most important
left to decay because of its emptiness.


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Brad
Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea
1 posted 2000-05-19 01:34 PM


I have no idea what you are attempting here.  The rest have to go.  Read the guidelines.

Brad

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