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Takunda New Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 2 |
LOVE FROM ABOVE LIKE A DOVE I SEND MY LOVE TO A DOVE, A LOVE THAT`S FROM ABOVE TO MY LOVE I SEND A KISS NOT TO BE MISSED, NOR BE DISMISSED I AM NOT IN LUST, I AM JUST IN LOVE WITH A DOVE BLESSING FROM ABOVE. By Normathemba(THE ONE IN WHOM WE TRUST) Palane (a Poet of Note). [This message has been edited by Takunda (edited 05-10-2000).] |
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bisundev New Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 9 |
Hi Takunda, It's a nice short piece of poetry. You sure have a good theme here. You might want to replace "Inlust" with 'in lust' and "inlove" with 'in love'. I also have a feeling that you are worrying about rhymes. Don't be restricted by rhymes, go for your feelings. I think you have done a pretty good job here. Keep writing. |
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