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zorkon65
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since 2000-04-22
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0 posted 2000-04-22 10:44 PM


this was also written for a friend after i got realy sick at school she helped me get to my car and she helped get me home
Show of weakness sign of strength
By charlie herring

Weak
Tired
My strength was gone
You came along
And picked me up
And helped me move on
And when I was ready to give up
You took my hand
And led me along the masters plan
You colded my fevered brow
And gave me drink when I was thirsty
Some say,” You do this because it is the Christian way”
But I know that is only partly right
It is because you are a friend
And when some say it is a sign of weakness
I, I know it is a show
Of strength



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