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kaile
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Grey sky casts shadow
Pounding rain!Ouch!Darts for cover

The last drizzle ends.

Spectrum of colours.Warm feel.
Smiles.A pot of gold,perhaps?

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Diana B
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1 posted 2000-03-18 12:28 PM

hey...you tried it...how did you like it...fun right?  now keep the theme and try in several different languages for a real treat... lots of fun while your waiting in line at the grocery store...now check the count on each line carefully...dont want anyone bursting your bubble...
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