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LunarFlame New Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 9Nova scotia, Canada |
Lost is my heart and part of my soul, my life is so shattered, my emotions are cold. the core of my life is hidden so well, surrounded by layers of personal hell. Secrets and dreams kept in seclusion, my existance, no more that a simple illusion. to have been noticed in this world and appreciated would have given me a life less isolated. they think they really understand my feelings, but none of them see the real pain im conceiling. too occupied with their own to care about me, ill wait until they suffer, then i will succeed. I'd rather be liked for more than appearance, my talent, my courage or being so fearless. Im hoping one day they will open their eyes, they'll see my real beauty, my beauty inside 8oÞ much luv and marshmallows, LunarFlame(LF) |
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Diana B Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 97 |
i lot of intense emotions here...softly spoken...until i got to "ill wait until they suffer, then i will succeed." changed the whole feeling for me. I wonder about it...did you mean it that way? or im i reading something into it not intended...interesting and very well written.. |
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