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LeeJ
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0 posted 2021-08-24 01:16 AM


I stare at a wall of green, sun lit and golden dreams
A golden curl of essence, a mighty prince, yet to be seen
by those still slumbering….
But I saw him, a buck run round and round, jumping
Deep into an endless abyss, vanishing
Back to 1999, flying, soaring high in some make believe world
fog and mirrors….a trama room and feelgood ministries, the bloodline preserved

Crying, begging, pleading, “let it not be true” again, another massacre
So I thought, but…shamed by little ones who broke their silence
Louder and louder, yes, never making a sound, knowing without knowing

Death becomes him that sleeps, this prince, in a NY state of mind
Switching gears from horror to an American love story and then,
A Golden chalice, captivating, yet short lived, setting off a bee’snest and....
The buzz spoke loud and deafening….songs from long ago

He is Where We all Go….together
A scripted analogy, of something ancient yet, something new and yet to be
Oh the wonder of all who see.

Weep not for tabloids lie, soon the networks will burn and die like a six pence
And Wilson’s side kick...

their all gone now, can you see, closed for the season
Like children who magically disappear without rhyme or reason

Opening up a whole new creation, a wildly different outcome
This realm beneath our Lord’s prayer, where I shall fear no evil....

Will we once again arise, to new historic traditions, the ones in which dreams are made of
Vinnie awakes, to alter his dragon’s fate
Connecting the dots, while shouting
I see dead people!

Check Mate!




[This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-25-2021 05:42 AM).]

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1 posted 2021-08-24 06:57 PM


Lee...Not sure who you are referring too, But I really liked the smoothness of this poem
Thanks for sharing and if you care to tell me the person in this I would really thank you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

LeeJ
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2 posted 2021-08-25 05:45 AM


Thank you Paul, for your kind words, greatly appreciate, and I may reveal the identity of the person at a later date, not sure yet...
Thought it would be fun to see if people can guess who it is?

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-26-2021 02:58 PM).]

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