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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2021-08-13 05:14 PM


The clouds do draw a veil across-
The moon’s poor, timeworn face.
The sun has fled to seek asylum
Somewhere out in space.

The wind does croon a lonely dirge
I hear it sigh and moan-
As if it’s hearts in tune with mine,
So sad and all alone.

The sky’s a somber shade and hue
The stars no twinkle give...
As if they, too, are missing you-
Have lost the will to live.

Ah, dark and melancholy mood-
Why dost thou haunt me so?
To grieve and mourn no comforts bring
As I too well should know.

Amnesia? What a blissful draught-
But not for me I fear...
When memories, on me do call
They always find me here.

If you should hap to think on me
I may as well confess....
I right here where I’ve always been
That same old, sad address.


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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2021-08-13 06:12 PM


Wonderful rhyme and meter Gunslinger, and a feeling I understand as well. I often wish my memory address could change for just a moment of relief. I really enjoyed this piece.

Best wishes and hugs,
Kit

Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
2 posted 2021-08-13 07:29 PM


Thank you, KIt. A kindred spirit.
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