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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2021-05-25 12:01 PM


Your heart you pray to keep
Lavish signals from your mind
Laughter in second hand misery
Complete the circuit baring your name.
Your heart you pray to beat,
Lovingly torn asunder
Which makes room for an
Eternity of what may have been.
Your heart you wish to share,
Long ago forgotten paths
Twisting amongst the radiance
Of time spent lifting others souls.
So like the shadow of the crescent moon
Spoken tapestry you find haunts
The inner road followed by your numbness ,
Lest time be the prisoner we need to free.

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augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
1 posted 2021-05-25 02:24 AM


Mr. MG, I really like the way the words play off of each other here..in a trippy wonderful
way, & those last 4 lines sooooo good.

Sky~

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