There Ain't A Piece Of Ice In This World I Ain't Slipped On...!

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Open Poetry #50

There Ain't A Piece Of Ice In This World I Ain't Slipped On...!

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-02-03 01:02 AM

'To err is human'
As bitter as a March wind
was her sullen face
>>>----->

I'll try and get it right the second time around!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-02-03 05:14 AM

So what is wrong with this? If it was my senyru you wouldn't judge it so harshly. Give yourself a break Bluesy.

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-02-03 11:22 AM

"This", my dear Miss Lori, was not the intended poem. I made a mistake and covered it up with a senyru. I don't do that "Moderator, please delete this" stuff...I just fill the void with even more tripe! Of course, I borrowed the first line from Alexander Pope's famous essay, with respects to indicate my grave mistake.

But I'm glad you liked my 'band-aid' anyway.

Many thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

3 posted 2018-02-03 06:30 PM

To err is human
But to learn from one's mistakes
Lends wisdom to life
Enjoyed your boo boo

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-02-05 04:18 AM

Thanks, Miss Pinky... I'll try, try, again!

...just bein' Bluesy

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