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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-01-03 01:11 AM


Not a dry eye to be found amongst the sandy pews along the ever-changing shore
My eyes see only you, baby

Their prayers become our promises binding us two.
My thoughts are only of you, lover

They eat, drink and toast to us as I delight in the cherried sweetness of your lips
These lips long to taste only you, my Queen

Toss the bouquet, then find the garter, and entreat a secret nibble or two
My longings are heightened for only you, my darling

Let this masquerade be over, honey, leave us two to dance alone in these treasured moments
I will give myself unrestrained to only you, my wife

On these soft white sands, warm moonlit showers the night in the shallows of the gentle sea
I drown myself in only you, my love

Our love was found lingering against the sway of a quivering coconut tree
You’ve left that part of only you, my sweet baby, beating inside of me

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-01-03 02:26 PM


I love it when you get mushy. You  do it so well, none of that sappy sickie sweet stuff.
Just right on the melt-o-meter. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-01-03 07:50 PM


Aww! That's sweet of you, Miss Lori!

It's one thing to write "mushy"... but when one reads it as such, they're on the same 'wavelength'. That's the long version of; "It takes one to know one".

Many thanks to you...

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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3 posted 2018-01-04 02:54 PM


Such tender and loving thoughts & promises ~ May it be this way for you and Linny forever my friend. Such a lovely read ~ Thank you for sharing your heart-words Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2018-01-22 04:58 AM


That's so nice of you, Miss Pinky...and so much you. Thank you so much!

...just bein' Bluesy

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