Open Poetry #50 |
Here Today And Gone Tomorrow |
Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
There is a crisp chill in the air tonight I pull my pink parka up around me close As memories of you nip at my heels You and I walked this same path together It now seems like a million years ago Holding hands and laughing into the wind The stars twinkled celebrating our love The moon shone down bathing us in soft glow All was right in the land of forever Whispered promises skitter through the night Like dead Autumn leaves that dance underfoot They are here today and gone tomorrow My heart and soul aches for our yesterdays My mind sleepwalks in the essence of you I wistfully walk in thought of what if... There is a crisp chill in the air tonight I pull my pink parka up around me close As memories of you nip at my heels © Poet In Pink https://youtu.be/fCE7Wgh84m4 |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Such a beautifully sad piece, Miss Pinky... quote:...and then this. I feel it it in my heart, as well. Very beautiful. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Having someone feel your words is the grandest gift of all ~ Thank you Bluesy for sharing & feeling them You made my night |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You have a gift, Miss Pinky. Not only for pulling at heartstrings and showing your own...but to meld your heartfelt poetry with music. Extraordinary. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Miss Pinkytune! I'm with Bluesy 100% on this one! Fantastic! ! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"All was right in the land of forever" . . . Isn't this the grandest look back at love forevermore (we thought)?! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a great mélancolique poetry, like a song in the heart yann |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Again I Thank you Bluesy for your kind words ~ Oft times I listen to music as I write ~ It inspires |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you dear Lori for your echo Appreciate your time and words always ~ Huggerz Pinkytune |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for reading and your kind thought Jerry ~ You know what they say....Hindsight is 20/20 |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you kindly for reading Yann Always so nice to hear from you ~ Alana |
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