Completion Of Transitioning Too Into One: It Was Good For Me Two...

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Open Poetry #50

Completion Of Transitioning Too Into One: It Was Good For Me Two...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-11-12 12:31 PM

Baby, you took my breath away as you woke me with a smile
Your kiss was like no other...and it lingered for a while

You ran your fingers through my hair and continued down my spine,
bringing them up my back again while telling me you’re mine

I longed so for your lips again, as I had just moments before
Then to take you in a warm embrace and whisper, “I want more...”

You drew your parted lips to mine and my heart...it skipped a beat
You softly stroked my face, my love and soon we were complete

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-11-12 05:17 AM

sigh...That is the sweetest set of lines to come from out of a refrigerator box under a bridge that I have ever heard. I bet you warmed up your box with this one

. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2017-11-12 03:03 PM

Many thanks, Lori Rhoden, It's for sure modern living hasn't changed you a bit! Love is where you find it, I always say. Well, I say other things too...but I wouldn't want to be banished to the "Mature" forums just for a "Freudian slip".

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

3 posted 2017-11-16 04:00 PM

Is it hot in here or is it just me?! lol I think I will just stick with a WoW! Passionately penned Alana

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2017-11-16 05:16 PM

Thanks so much, Miss Pinky, but hot? Aw...that's because Lori Rhoden tore the thermostat off the wall! Now who's gonna fix that?

...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (11-16-2017 06:46 PM).]

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