Poetess Protracted On My Palliasse

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Open Poetry #50

Poetess Protracted On My Palliasse

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-11-06 01:26 AM

Deep breathing on a crisp, pensive afternoon,
exhaling proof of a thought captured
in a wisp of frozen air,
then dispersed into the universe,
like the sigh of a poetess…wistful and alive

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-11-06 05:28 AM

That is downright beautiful Bluesy. Your image is vivid yet gentle on the mind and heart. I really like it a lot. ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-11-06 08:42 AM

Excellent choice of words. Terse and decisive. Makes for a great read.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2017-11-07 02:00 AM

Thank you, Miss Lori.
I enjoyed reading your reply.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2017-11-07 02:01 AM

Thank you for your complimentary reply, Jerry.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI

5 posted 2017-11-16 02:44 PM

Such a beautiful thought you have creatively penned Bluesy ~ This poetess is sighing Alana

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

6 posted 2017-11-16 05:28 PM

...and you are so 'wistful and alive'. I know, Miss Pinky. I've read you.

...just bein' Bluesy

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