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Remembering You
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Remembering You |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Remembering You Beneath a floating moon in its sea of silver clouds and tremulous stars, the gentle voice of a twilight wind, along this forest edge of vanishing wilderness, echoes my whispered promise, as from a waking dream: I shall remember you ! ... --- b. e. adams (2/4/2017) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Remembering can be a good, or bad thing. I believe your remembrance is a good one. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks JP ! My "word-painted" 'rememberences' are far better than the realities. (I'm rather the 'poster boy' for rejections by women) |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Your "paintings" are always rich with warm colors Bruce and this one is no exception. As long as you never stop 'painting', a new canvas will always present itself. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks "Bluesy!" ... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is poetry i call "alive", for me seoondhanddreamer there is not so much people doing that,even for a while, thanks for sharing the beauty of the world have a good day yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks, Yann ! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Some people make such a huge impact in our lives, Beautiful poem dreampoet. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Sadly, it has been my 'oft repeated 'experience' though, that I never made a similar 'impact' on them/their lives ... |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
One just can't please or attract, but we never stop trying. It's the human thing to do. Lovely poem. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...please! |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Ah, prose. Where would we be without it? Still going strong, I see. We joined right around the same time in 2006, but you have been much more prolific! Now warm and fuzzy all over. Thanks! I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks to each of you for commenting on this li'l poetic scribble ! |
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