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Open Poetry #50

For You My Love

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2017-09-14 09:45 AM

    For You My Love

My love for you …

is the first blossom
    of Spring,
the sweetest song-
bird chorus of dawn,
the sunbeams that
spin in every drop
of morning dew,
a breeze that sets
the willow leaves
    to dance,
the infinite beauty
in each soft summer
    sunset,
gentle moonlight
on new-fallen snow,
the joyful flame
   of passion
that even oceans
cannot quench,
and this poem …

for you, my love!

          --- b. e. adams (9/14/2017)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-09-14 12:00 PM

Each line in this beauty, was fantastic!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2017-09-14 01:56 PM

Thank you, JP !

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

3 posted 2017-09-17 08:34 PM

Beautiful heart words Bruce I am sure your love will adore this! Alana

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2017-10-12 02:54 AM

Clearly, the most beautiful gifts.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2017-10-12 06:56 AM

the sweetest song-
bird chorus of dawn,
the sunbeams that
spin in every drop
of morning dew

this one for me, was the best, b/c I love the early morning dawn....

lovely

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2017-10-12 03:26 PM

Such a lovely picture of your love. Enjoyed.

-Trina
...because the most powerful words in your life are "I might be wrong"...

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