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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-09-06 12:07 PM



Within A Silky Nights Embrace


In China
big white cranes
fill the sky
glamorizing the beauty
of the countryside;
white crane spread your wings
to fly, fly, fly away
my little China girl
has gone astray,
now who will I kiss
in light of day,
who's lips will I trace
within a silky nights embrace.


James Lee
9/6/17

  
    

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-09-06 12:36 PM


For one who loves the  Orient, loss of love is lamented deeply...with many tears.

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2017-09-06 09:08 AM


Ah James, this one is wonderful and beautiful in each and every line.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2017-09-07 04:56 PM


so wonderful
yann

Poet In Pink
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MI
4 posted 2017-09-08 02:38 PM


Tenderly penned James   Enjoyed muchers ~ Alana
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2017-10-06 09:17 PM


Thank you Bluesy, Jerry, 2islander2 and Poet in Pink for the nice responses...james
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