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Your Heart
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Your Heart |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Your Heart Here in this twilight calm of gentle moonbeams dancing on rooftops, like a shadow that walks these lonely evening streets, I am the ghost moving in a mirage within a dream, seeking magic words, the loveliest ever painted on the grand-eternal canvas of the ages or written with the finest 'voice' of passion in the immortal book of time … words of the most perfect rhythm, sound, and meaning that could somehow catch and hold your loving 'heart' forever --- b. e. adams (9/3/2017) |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Beautifully sculpted poetry Bruce. Truly. This line, in particular, reached out to me: quote: Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
so glad you liked this li'l "poetic scribble!" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
That was my favorite part too! Constructive advice: the ' you used in this poem I feel were unnecessary. Really nice romantic "scribble" ~L |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Lori ! |
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