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This is the Love
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This is the Love |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
This is the Love At the end of another beginning I'm drunk on the sweetness of winning beauty has scarred me back to whole love and light is a sacred space and all the planets take their place from this distance I can still feel the pull Your heart in sync with mine pumping a new kind of wine mingling together like the rivers of all my dreaming between the roses and the thorns so much meaning it's magical beautiful and I know where it comes from and where it goes and it'll never ever be enough this is the love At the beginning of another end I count steps till you come 'round the bend these hands hunger for you to hold love and light is a soft cool flame and all the planets speak your name from this distance I'm stirred by your soul Your heart in sync with mine pumping a new kind of wine mingling together like the rivers of all my dreaming between the roses and the thorns so much meaning it's magical beautiful and I know where it comes from and where it goes and it'll never ever be enough this is the love Separate the clouds from the blue and find what's underneath see the blending of me and you and find a new kind of belief what was once one is two and of all the love I thought I knew this is the love this is the love And it's magical beautiful it's magical nothing more beautiful I know where it comes from and where it goes and it'll never ever be enough it'll never be enough and it's all I've ever dreamed of this is the love this is the love and I can't ever get enough of this love "Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my gosh...this is beyond magical. There is so much to love about your poem. The rose is definitely not without thorns. and like love the river runs deep. Mostly I loved the the stars and how the planet's line up. The soft cool flame is the real kicker though...and wine to go with it no less. *swoon* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Your heart in sync with mine pumping a new kind of wine mingling together like the rivers of all my dreaming between the roses and the thorns so much meaning" my favorite lines... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....james |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just beautiful, my friend . . . j. |
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