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while driving |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
while driving, I write, because I drive, I cross landscapes, while I drive, I think of you, lost beneath the stars The absentee always presents, I drive, I become again a judge Of my loves, I become again a poet And desire the world, Runner of landscapes Rather than of underskirts, I drive. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (08-16-2017 12:24 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing and driving...james |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Love this Yann!! I do that when I drive also ~ The mind just kind of drifts along and thinks while driving. Some of my poetry has come to me while driving ~ I could hardly wait to get home to write it down before I forgot it! lol Much enjoyed the read  Alana |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks james, smiley too yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello , alana, it is exactly what i Do. your comment is so accurate for inspiration. during some years, i remember rushing home, repeating verses. Now I always have a 'white carnet" besides me dor writing, it is easier and I get more freedom. yann |
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